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Friday 14 August 2020

Jasmine's Writing

 Jasmine's writing


Wow Jasmine what a fantastic opinion piece. I like the way you told me what you would do instead. You have remembered to use finger spaces, a capital letter, listen to your sounds and use the word because. I think you are right, if the giants caught you they would eat you up!


Keep up the excellent writing.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jasmine, great writing effort. I like your idea to sell your house and move - good thinking!

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